separation

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i wrote this on christmas! 

separation

there is a separation between me and my family 
i can feel it pulling me deeper and deeper into an abyss 
the cords that once connecting us splitting apart 
i fight against this force with everything i have within me 
as i look to se what i'm up against, i see a dark angel pulling me 
into the blackness 


i scream and fight, but it's no use 

i've become someone i don't recognize 

no one can tame this monster i've become  

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markrohaley commented on separation

12-26-2009

The Lord Jesus Christ is able to? In His love Mark

anglescry2

12/27/2009

no dude i have given up on him

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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