unheard

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i had my heart broken and this was one way for me to vent ... hope you like it!

unheard

as this silence encloses around us , and reality seeps in, the pedestal you put me on c
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                                 s under me and i fall from an enormous height , i watch you, watching me bleed and cry these broken tears 


i wonder if you ever really cared at all...

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SEVEN commented on unheard

09-24-2009

I love the structure of this poem...I literally saw the crumbling and the fall, the bleeding and the tears.....its a very vivid piece.. now this is whats called an Original Poetry....good write....this totally gets a 10 mainly for originality....Kudos

anglescry2

09/27/2009

thank you soo much.. i was afraid no one would like it..

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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