Winter Rose

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    Winter Rose

    Although the evening sun had set
    the winter tasks had not been met
    a single rose put forth its bloom
    as if it were a day in June

    I stopped and looked with disbelief
    it's slender stalk and shiny leaf
    appearing this December day
    velvet red, exquisite display

    It didn't seem to mind the cold
    and showed it's colors, bright and bold
    but I was cold, so cold indeed
    still felt it's warmth inside of me

    The promise of a future spring
    an earthen message, life to bring
    would have to wait another day
    I departed quickly on my way

    then paused, looked back with wistful smile
    at the rose that went the extra mile

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    dahlusion commented on Winter Rose

    02-25-2010

    "It didn't seem to mind the cold and showed it's colors, bright and bold but I was cold, so cold indeed still felt it's warmth inside of me" — the rhyming, inside and outside, of this verse is superb. Sweet poem!

    nayachiro

    02/25/2010

    thanks, dah, I'm glad you liked it and "got it" . take care

    dawnjyc commented on Winter Rose

    12-13-2009

    This is very good. Adds a bit of warmth to a harsh cold winter. The last stanza wrapped this poem up nicely.

    nayachiro

    12/14/2009

    thanks, we all need a little warmth from time to time

    SavVySam commented on Winter Rose

    12-13-2009

    A beautifully written poem! Thank you for sharing!

    nayachiro

    12/14/2009

    thanks for your words, glad you enjoyed the read

    WordSlinger commented on Winter Rose

    12-13-2009

    This is a really good poem, it made me smile, that you for adding to my sever case of happiness, WS

    nayachiro

    12/14/2009

    Thanks for reading my stuff, WS, glad you liked it! keep on smilin

    nayachiro

    12/14/2009

    Thanks for reading my stuff, WS, glad you liked it! keep on smilin

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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