Feelings

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    • nayachiro
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    Feelings

    I don't need to know your name

    when you knock upon my door.

    I don't need to see your face

    as you reach into my core.

     

    I feel your breath, hot, on my chest.

    I hold the screen door tight.

    I can't let you in, certain death.

    But, let you in I might.

     

    Now or tomorrow

    or with my last goodbye.

    You enter in as long tailed wisps

    pull through like threads on high.

     

    They lay me bare, in limbic dance,

    I open to the stream.

    Each breath the movement pushes forth

    It’s never what it seems.

     

    At first it’s cold then warm release,

    the feeling passes through.

    But I’m still here, surprised, alive.

    There’s nothing more to do.

     

    A hollow tube is what I'd be

    if I would stop the fight.

    Life unfettered flowing through

    unto my own delight.


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    Connected2u commented on Feelings

    12-21-2009

    Never stop the fight....for life is the battle we are in. Loved it, really trueand can relate. Keep up the great work!!!

    summerrose35 commented on Feelings

    12-07-2009

    Wow! This is the first I have read from you and wont be the last! I loved it!Well done!

    nayachiro

    12/07/2009

    Thanks for your comment. Please keep writing too.

    MarionYost commented on Feelings

    12-05-2009

    wow, Amazing! I Love this. Such a way with words. thanks for sharing all the best -Marion-

    Teardrops commented on Feelings

    12-04-2009

    your fight for life you will win you have the heart of a poet and they are truly strong hearts love the poem hope to read more

    nayachiro

    12/04/2009

    Thanks Teardrop. I look forward to reading you as well. Strong open hearts are the way to go, yes ?

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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