Set Free

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  • nayachiro
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Set Free

The aging time upon me, all remedies fail 
and this soft spoken bitter truth  
must now be taken in
like a late coming stranger at the door 
whose tale speaks of the dark night

Luster and hardness gone,  
gleaned by time itself, 
the remnant of steel and fire
folded, straightened then heated again 
'til finding no resistance in it's strength, yields

Therein is found the greatest peace

What is the meaning of our lives, 
if not to be tempered by our failings ? 
This daily union of blood and toil 
bearing witness to the mystery, 
all things seen anew.

Life is sacred revealed and 
I can no more pretend 
that anything is common 
or even needs fixing. 

Death is the final medicine.

Tell me again, please,
to care for the ones 
who have entered here 
to be seen 
to be felt 
to be loved 
and in their precious time 
set free.

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SavVySam commented on Set Free

01-14-2010

Wow...Some very deep and insightful delving in the piece! I see this is not entered into the weekly contest and it really should be! Fine,fine work!~10~

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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