Will He?

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    The thoughts of being enough

    Will He?

     All these thoughts are running through my head like wild horses.
    Thoughts of what we'll be like.
    Will we stay together?
    Will he love me for that long?
    Does he care enough to do it for me?
    All of these thoughts of what he might think of me.
    Am I pretty enough?
    Will I be enough for him?
    If I go, will he still think of me?
    Will he respond if i write him?
    Will he be there when I call?
    Can we make it through this?
    I pray with all my heart he'll still be there.
    Be there to welcome me back to his arms.
    Will he?

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    Tempestlady commented on Will He?

    06-02-2009

    A demonstration of very young love. Liked the rhythm, liked the rhyme, love isnt really about time though. If you knew before hand the knowing would ruin it. So, love and laugh and live through it. Even i you don't make it, having the opportunity for true love is usually worth it.
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