Who's reality?

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    Who's reality?

    I’ve dream, I’ve cried
    I’ve lived I’ve died

    My life was long but far too short
    No words come, none worth retort

    With hope and with passion
    I gave it all, in my fashion

    These words have meaning but to few
    My thoughts may seem strange to you
    If dead I am, how can it be true
    That these words are here, if only I knew

    Realities merge and split again
    Life ends before it can ever begin
    To know the dreams of youth
    To see them dashed with age
    Some ask for some sort of proof
    Just trust me son turn the page

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    Aza commented on Who's reality?

    07-18-2009

    With each of your poems, I get a message. I don't assume to know your heart, just wanted you to know, you touch mine. With your words. Thanks

    Mark412

    07/20/2009

    Thank you for your comments. It makes me very glad that my words can touch another in such a way.

    ginga commented on Who's reality?

    07-06-2009

    A coming of age poem. I always like these since I have overcome challenges of loss and love. Live life to your fullest w/o regrets is the warning to heed here (is my interpretation of the poem). Ginga

    MizBlaze commented on Who's reality?

    11-16-2008

    Wow that was powerful. I get it.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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