When You Died

0 Comments

Tags:
  • Lost Love
    • ,
  • Sadness
    • ,
  • Life
    • ,
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    For my father who passed away March 1, 2010 unexpectedly. One year later and the pain is too much to bear. I miss you so much Dad.

    When You Died


    My heart stopped when you died
    I died when you died
    The same person I am no more
    You changed my whole world

    People say that time heals all wounds
    I disagree totally
    They must be people who have not experienced
    Ever losing a loved one
    The pain is too great
    For anything to heal it
    For me, a cure was not invented
    I will never be healed
    My life is forever changed

    So here I am, one year later
    One year since you've been gone
    Things have not changed for me
    Things are still the same
    I miss you so much Daddy
    I wish you never died




    Poem Comments

    (0)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    jaw2005’s Poems (20)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Bonded By A Little Boy 0 03/17/2019
    MY SPARK OF RAY 0 03/16/2019
    STILL MISSING YOU 0 02/17/2011
    When You Died 0 02/17/2011
    Mirror 0 03/29/2010
    Separated By The Ocean 0 03/29/2010
    THANK YOU DAD 0 03/25/2010
    Quiet And Strong 0 11/25/2008
    Everyday 2 11/25/2008
    My Good Best Friend 1 11/22/2008
    Because I Love You 1 11/22/2008
    My Special Message 0 11/22/2008
    The First Phone Call 0 11/22/2008
    Out Of Love 0 11/22/2008
    My Two J's 0 11/22/2008
    With Him 0 11/22/2008
    I Was Scared 1 11/22/2008
    When He Leaves 0 11/22/2008
    You Are The One 0 11/22/2008
    My Constant Battle 3 11/22/2008
    Top of Page