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    • new book is out now,,,,INSIDE MY INNER THOUGHTS,,,SCUBIE ALBIE...

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    after cynthia,on fb..

    used to

    it used to feel like heaven,,

    until it happen to you..yes she make me do it

    men fight for this not to happen,whooo love

    i dont know why anymore,no one want to know

    how to cure the ills of love until they get over

    the hill or when u get older,i just wish someone would

    have told me,,but the heat of the moment kills me dead

    or i miss her i truely miss her,,,

     

    it used to feel like heaven on fb yes it was ur face

    u words ur song ur vibes,till it happen to me,the shoe is

    on my feet and i try to turn the clock back,oooh love,why

    now they gone away and every one want to know the truth,is this the

    way it suppose to be,when it happen to you,when love take

    a hold of your heart and you simply cant stand to see

    i don't know,she say it was so,u used to play sweet songs of melody,

    write small lines of intrigue and prose meant only for me,was i a fool to believe

    this was social,love gone wrong,,now they are gone away,,

     

    don't tell me i cant write like that provoke

    i am older yet one told me love can be so

    unkind,until it happen to you,speak less and give

    me your ears, it used to feel like heaven on earth,be home early to see ur face

    ur thoughts ur profile oool love,went to the wall

    as i care less just to be a part of your world connected

    to ur dreams,ur symphony u can only learn

    these things from been in love and loved in return,,

    so when you sit at home and close your

    eyes what do u see of me,for when one door close many

    will be open and ur mind don't really know the

    difference in thinking love,you won't believe what

    love can do until it happen to you,,how come

    nothing feels the same now that ur not there,it used to feel like heaven

    yes it used to...

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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