six feet six..

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    final journey that walk of eternal bless,six feet six..

    six feet six..

    yes the dead is buried
    and the hood is full of pain
    tears is all over the lane
    and  there is no love to share,

    i cant talk to  the dead
    so i turn to my poetry
    looking in the eyes of my brother
    who is standing up for his own vibes

    so when you put the dead to lay
    open your heart for the pain,for you
    can cry,but it is still pain, rain will still fall
    and the sun will shine..

    yes we are going off with revenge
    for we know who did it,and so we find
    our self hiding in the thoughts mad voices,,
    running around with the one pop loaded
    looking to pop a cap in heat,packing like a rat
    ready to hit the ground flat,here comes the Hearst
    black cat stacks in packs,white sheets cover casket.
    gangster knee deep six feet six hell bound in chains
    lay to rest in grief sorrow  it is all done..

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    anaisnais commented on six feet six..

    10-28-2010

    I can feel the rap style of this piece, six foot under but do we really want bring same pain to another persons family, and if we did would that not lower us to same level as the original killer and then what if we were wrong in our judgement? Let them live with their guilt it will be far harder in my opinion... Thanks for your comments today....

    Sx9

    10/28/2010

    you are not seeing the fire,its burning everywhere,this pain is just one person pain,but was felt by a whole community everywhere who are met with this vibes,gangster death there are those who remember what you live for and so will cry joy,,think about it,,

    ayyan commented on six feet six..

    10-28-2010

    Very nice poem, six by six that brings inner heart touch of human. Fine -ayyan dj

    Sx9

    10/28/2010

    thanks for the ride.

    MrGee commented on six feet six..

    10-26-2010

    A nice tribute to a loved one. Violence seems to be the way of the world these days.

    Sx9

    11/16/2010

    just endless,,

    ginga commented on six feet six..

    10-25-2010

    Sx9, This my dear poet sir touches that place inside where dark fear resides. Your words strike a tender chord and reveal so much. ty ginga

    Stryx commented on six feet six..

    10-23-2010

    I like the Jamacan sound of this. It comes through.

    Sx9

    07/18/2011

    what a relief,yes indeed its all over the page,,thanks man..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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