Unnoticed Flare

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    The story in this poem begins obviously in Winter. The cold feelings expressed, 'freezes' time, and disturbs the flight of renewed thoughts, making unbearable the feelings. The lost warmth, taken place my unclear vision makes recovery impossible. Blame is not an option, when the person cannot see. And so the only option would be to let go of the feelings felt, no? And so the decision has been made. Yet every time there's that moment, when reunited, it's like... all the cold and frozen feelings melt, like they were never there. But then when departed, everything falls back to winter...and so it all continues...

    Unnoticed Flare

    Winters wind. It shrieks.

    With icy voice it speaks.

    It freezes and it paralyzes.

    Stone cold is what it specializes.

     

    The invisible to eye current stays present in the spring;

     It wrestles and wins ardent, freezing everything.

    Disturbing flight of birds too swift, the movement of fine hair

    Then ‘everything’ soon becomes so retched and unfair.

     

    I wondered once: what happened?

    What happened with the sun?

    I’d waited for so long. For it to finally come.

    But instead found mist and haze;

    Awaiting many, many days.

     

    Wrapped in darkened fog. To barely see?

    You don’t even know what you have done to me.

    It’s not your fault. I don’t think anyways.

    For how are you to know

    The long many days…

     

    Concluding this, I’ve chosen to forget

    Yet failed miserably in the slow attempt

    Because when noticed, face to face

    I fall in the imaginary, hope and embrace.

     

    Inescapable, seems to be.

    It’s time to finaly, be set free.

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    cutbanksam commented on Unnoticed Flare

    01-10-2011

    Great job of creating images to which we can all relate in one way or another. A favorite and a 10. Thnx

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Unnoticed Flare

    01-10-2011

    I like how you use the cold to describe the emotions of the love and the inability to let go. The cold place it takes you, but still having the longing and of the embrace. Wonderfully done:)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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