Ill of Mind

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This is a bi-personality [yin and yang] with great contradiction. The phrases within brackets are descriptions of the 'before' phrase.

Ill of Mind

This confined state of mind, of which madness conjures, is of loss for hope and ambition. So seemingly concrete in hold, yet producing the desire for deliverance of Itself'.

Having said this, there is and always was, if even the slightest fragment of being, a share of personality in definite refinement. Who, individually, has the desire to be revealed to its' absolute aid, the mind.

The nemesis and rival, of said personality, who so triumphs in its' victorious conquer of the mind, finds the protagonist an utterly pathetic excuse for a thought, although at moments the strength of its' existence overwhelms the whole of assembly.

In conscious and subconscious realm, the havoc of rivals proceed, and even to the extent of physical view [this being the madness conjured]. Of which, begins the obsessive attempt to veil the evidence, [having escaped the conscious realm and into the physical dimension] so as to continue as if all havoc had birthed not.

This being the present circumstance, and with all do respect to personal feelings [being of my own] I am obliged to relieve [somewhat] the oppression of my inner being. I conclude these confessions with little determination and faith, for the battle within is the most difficult to win.


Sincerely, Malady of Mind

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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