Universe

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    I wrote this for my scientist Steve Betz. He is one scientist that I am glad that is in the world. Like so many Americans I have met a wonderful person.

    Universe

    Universe

    I wonder that in the Universe,

    I know, brown dust

    Has a story to tell.

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    RHPeat commented on Universe

    12-09-2010

    Little Speck Of Dust// Dust of myself where have you drifted where have you flown where have you roamed where have you settled settled in to build a home /// a poet friend/ RH Peat Oh stardust where have you gone.
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    Paolo

    12/10/2010

    More this "I'll show you fear in a handful of dust." Nothing of dust brings me fear more than truth.

    gogant commented on Universe

    12-09-2010

    Okay, I'll go along with that.............strict, but quaint. Truly well thought out, Paolo....................................................gogant
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    Paolo

    12/09/2010

    Greetings Gogant, from Italy. You understand! Science is strict; in the US, a country that I love as much as my own, science is under attack by some and ignored. But I realise that the aim of science if factual truth such as the Universe that is even in dust. Perhaps, here in this explanation, I have told too much, when my work typically asks you to determine a solution.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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