Meanders
Meanders
The river runs here,
meanders through
---meadows,
the-----undercut bank,
slicing through the low
hills, dividing
this emerald scene
with determined justice--
Meanders
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Tags: Nature
Poem Commentary
I've written this work quickly, as my thoughts painted this in my head. It will need tender surgery to be sure.
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01-13-2011
- Polo/ This is a good one. It reminds me of Tennyson's "The Brook" It has the same peaceful feeling of acceptance, between here and there. A poet friend// RH Peat
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