Coffee
The hot brown stream pours
into a warmed cup with cream,
lends its self to vapor curls
of steady turning spirals
above the empty breakfast
with some poison for the cups
Coffee
8 Comments
Tags: Dark
Poem Commentary
Over breakfast I had a thought.
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12-07-2010
- The implication of two here is the meat of this poem. You are so subtle Polo. I love the twists here in a love poem. The metaphor gets deeper the more you read it. Nice bit of splendor I must say. A poet friend// RH Peat
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12/07/2010
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08-13-2010
- I totally saw the picture here,,,,good write,,,,Kudo points for you
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07-07-2010
- I am one who has long held the misconception that coffee provides manhood with the necessary nutrients (or poisons) to keep going. Your poem is brief and bouncy, like a good cuppa itself..
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12/07/2010
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knight4696 commented on Coffee
04-27-2010
- Paolo - I have a couple of vices - but this is my number one. I drink mine iced and Black - no sugar - I am definately hooked., but wouldn't want it any other way! :) Great work my friend! :) Ken
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WordSlinger commented on Coffee
02-20-2010
- Awesome, a needed verse in the morning of the earth, have another, :) ty WS
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