unforgotten

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  • lemuwah
  • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

unforgotten


Listen to the wind
whispering through the trees.
Feel the message it craves to send.
It brings you to your knees.
A calming breath through the tears.
Yearning to be exempt.
Treading carefully through the years
Somehow knowing it's time is spent.
Soon it will be dead and all things will grieve.
But not one tear will it shed.
Perhaps it doesn't really leave
Weaving softly beside me,
allusively it's here, for eternity.

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cmlestrade commented on unforgotten

01-25-2010

What a lovely poem. You showed such mastery with image rhyme and rhythm. This was a very enjoyable read.

torimode commented on unforgotten

08-28-2009

I really enjoyed this poem. So beautiful! This poem really spoke to me.

lemuwah

08/28/2009

thank you very much, this is one of my favorites. I appreciate your kind words.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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