demise

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    • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

    demise

     Watch the world as it passes
    looking through these thin clear glasses.
    I see the world as it goes,
    I feel things no one knows.
    Why is my heart so tight,
    under this flimsy sheet of white?
    Please don't let me die this way
    I want to live another day.
    Please don't bury me i plead
    I'll be the perfect child you need
    God don't make this my last dance,
    give me animation, just one more chance.
    I didn't mean to become so drunk,
    So why god this eternal bunk?

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    Photojan12 commented on demise

    11-14-2009

    This is not an unusual feeling. If we feel life slipping away we all want to live. I got accidently hit over the head recently by the closing of a trunk. I thought I was dying and your words were my prayer... It wasn't my time... and not yours either
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    cmlestrade commented on demise

    09-26-2009

    Surprising end, this was so well written so entertaining; yet, their is a serious vein about drunkeness. You used irony to plead your case with a compelling promise,
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    Hampton commented on demise

    09-16-2009

    Pleading with God to give one time to continue with life after an almost fatal mistake.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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