innocence lost

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  • lemuwah
  • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

innocence lost

Can he not see what he has done
He ruined my life when it begun
Why must I remember the pain
Can he not suffer the same?

Why was I not believed back then?
Don't they know lying is a sin
Why must they see me as a pest
Don't they know I suffered best.

I lost what little I had
because he decided to be bad.
Why do I get the blame?
He's the one that made the claim.

Won't this pain ever cease?
Then I would finally have some peace
Why can't he be pained by the past?
My misery will eternally last.

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cmlestrade commented on innocence lost

11-03-2009

A nice emotion expressed a little awkwardly with . Example-he ruined my life when it begun. Also felt like you were using any word that might rhyme which affected the rhythm of your work. All in all a good effort.

Hampton commented on innocence lost

09-16-2009

A painful past experience expressed with poetic anguish

gogant commented on innocence lost

08-29-2009

Sounds as though you had a relationship that turned bad. I hope you live to love another day. A very nice poem you came up with here to release some of your pain...

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

lemuwah’s Poems (13)

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if i could see 6
demise 3
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innocence lost 3
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scattered petals 1
unforgotten 2
Wandering 2
whisper 6
what you mean to me 2
Just Questions 4