Just Questions

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  • lemuwah
  • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

Just Questions

What is the benefit of trust?
All of it pain tearing around inside.
Covered by deceptions evil eye.
Gazing at the minds of innocents youth.
Fooling them into igniting a Dream.
Making believe-thinking every word truth.

Young rebels seeking the Dream--
Trying to find truth
looking for it in ones eyes.
Searching for deception inside.
Catching a glimpse of youth,
Finding a reason to want trust.

Knowing why it's hard to trust.
Lies glimmer-reflecting in their own eyes.
Then digging deep within-what's inside?
Ah yes-the sight of broken dreams!
Wanting one's own past- their youth.
Desperately hoping it's truth.

Rooms full of shattered dreams
based on pain and trust.
All anyone wants is truth.
Weren't they taught honesty in youth.
Pain flowing in dead eyes
Only they know what's inside.

Seeking the perfect youth
So stars can fly in Dreams.
Little thoughts-shining eyes.
Knowing you need trust
to be healthy inside.
Do you believe the truth?

Is it really the truth?
In "I Love You" do you trust?
Is it coming from inside?
Can it become the source of dreams?
Was it shown in youth?
or is life about shielded eyes?

Trust is based from youth.
Dreams reflected in eyes.
You find truth on the inside.

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cmlestrade commented on Just Questions

10-19-2009

Very intense questions we should all ask ourselves. Wonderful poem but hear to see because the color was so light.

Charlie23 commented on Just Questions

08-29-2009

Another great write! Only suggestion I have to offer would be on the font, while it fits with the poems wording nicely, it's a bit hard on my eyes. I would just say for that font, maybe black coloring, or a boldness would help! The poem itself, excellent!

fred1932 commented on Just Questions

08-28-2009

this is deep, very. oh, something i wanted to tell you. thanks for the friendship offer. very touched. you need friends in the poetic world. even at my age , some are still searching for the truth

lemuwah

08/28/2009

Thank you! was from when i came to realize truth and trust are intertwined. Thank you for the comment and the friendship, both mean alot to me!

AzurePoet commented on Just Questions

08-25-2009

This was deep. I feel as if I've asked these questions as well. Inspiring, I would say.

lemuwah

08/28/2009

Thank you! Am glad I was able to convey what I felt in a way others could relate to. Thank you for reading and rating. :D

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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