Twisted

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Read and Study the Bible for Yourself- For those of You who don't....You will be deceived.

Twisted

Let's take the truth and
Stretch it as far as we can,
I can't understand why Someone
Would be so harsh to say I
Can't do this based of off what
Some "Old book" on the shelf says...

Let's do it this way
Instead, Let's make our own
Set of rules and call them
"Perceptions and Opinions"
Let's coin the phrases,
"Non-discriminate and Acceptable
Forms of lifestyles and perceptions"

Let's take different pieces of phrases
And create various denominations for
Those who are willing to follow
Some pieces of the "Old Book"
And the parts they don't want can
Be easily smoothed over or thrown aside...

Let's lock conviction in a box
And dress up lies with a red fur coat
And cute green socks! Let's offer 
Presents to those who will comply...

Don't study or read!
Don't ask for opened eyes!
Open wide and feed off of
Everything you see and hear...

Let's keep them under the dark.





 

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Sali commented on Twisted

04-20-2012

Actually, what corrupt man the most is his uncanny ability and undeniable trust in His flawed human mind. Most people do not like to accept the fact that their mind is flawed and corrupt. Sometimes people are too smart for their own good.

Jinsei commented on Twisted

03-27-2012

It is an excellent piece, no doubt, however, I will say that personally, I believe that people who think this way are corrupt by the fire that is their well being. That is what I am getting out of it, considering the title "Twisted", and some of the wording in this especially the last part of it.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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