top of the sky

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    sitting across from her one day, i realized that her eyes were not just blue, but many, many beautiful colours, most of which i have never seen. they say we will witness new colours in heaven if we are so fortunate. i have already seen some of these in her eyes.

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    your eyes are a thousand colours
    ten billion others cannot catch the beauty of yours
    i feel adored when they see me
    and welcome me into a room

    i love to look at you
    those looks turn to stares
    for my eyes love you, too
    and those stares burn into long loving gazings

    here is where your eyes do their delicate dance
    a kaleidoscope of brilliant things
    rings of color and hope circle me, wrap me
    as fire burns twice in blue electric ice

    and reveals this beautiful girl








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    cttgad commented on top of the sky

    09-20-2012

    Loved the emotions and visuals of enchantment you bring out in the girl through her eyes. Keep writing. I loved it.
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    Phission

    09/21/2012

    my god, i love her. lol. sometimes i forget how much a part of me she is/was. i am reminded of her when i read the words i dedicate. i miss her.

    cttgad

    09/21/2012

    There will always people who come into our lives that leave a lasting impression, a love that never dies. The hardest part is to learn to love them in a different way.

    TheLastCowboy commented on top of the sky

    08-22-2012

    great write, Love how you tell of more than just blue in her eyes and how a look turns into so much more. Wish this was longer soI could read more lol GREAT write!!!!
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    Phission

    09/25/2012

    thank you, cowboy. i really do appreciate your time.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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