freight rain

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    the morning arrives like a late train
    alarmed i am wounded awake
    with lights, steam and freight rain
    rusted rails and air brakes

    pain in my head and heart broken
    i used my last token
    but only got halfway home

    i am reliving the wreck of you and me
    all alone
    each
    and
    every
    day

    i miss you so


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    crhymethinc commented on freight rain

    01-24-2013

    Nicely done. I like the word play "late train/freight rain". That is classic.
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    Phission

    01/24/2013

    thank you so much. i think a poem should be thoughtful, entertaining and honest.

    Kingwebstar commented on freight rain

    12-28-2012

    This is a great write great metaphors too. I been on GSpoetry.com as of lately but I still return here. Love ya bro Hope to see you there Love ur Eminence
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    Phission

    01/23/2013

    thank you and keep doing that thang you do !

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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