goodnight, summer night

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    i was standing on my deck above my backyard and the sun was fast disappearing into someone else's today. i am a little sad as i feel fall approaching but, i love fall, too. so it's a win, win thing :) this is just my send off poem to my favourite season.

    goodnight, summer night

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    goodnight, summer night
    goodnight to flips flops
    and standing on rooftops to view your stars
    goodnight, summer night
    hello to warm sweaters
    and love letters by the fire
    goodnight, summer night
    thanks for your life afoot and prior
    and the wink you will throw me
    when snow is above and below me
    this winter.


    goodnight,
    sweet, sweet summer night








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    combatrider commented on goodnight, summer night

    01-17-2014

    You must enter a poem comment before you can rate this poem. All poem comments must be a minimum of 50 characters (not words). All that just to say I like it.
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    Crush

    01/19/2014

    lol thank you :)

    Tony5880 commented on goodnight, summer night

    01-29-2013

    i live thiis poem and traveled this element we call time. hot days to cold ways when you see the snow falling on what you thought would be a sunny flight! hey when the cold winds tail and what you thought my be hail i guess the sunny days have gone a flight!
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    Phission

    01/29/2013

    thank you so much ! most appreciated :)

    cttgad commented on goodnight, summer night

    09-20-2012

    I enjoyed this poem. Love that others look at things like that. A great read and wonderful visuals. Thanks
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    Crush

    09/21/2012

    thank you so much for your time. sometimes i hope/wish that other people other than poets read poetry. i hope so. we/you have so much to share.

    cttgad

    09/21/2012

    So true. I think that everyone loves poetry, just some more than others.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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