music and dreams

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    love, my lover and my monster.

    music and dreams

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    often my heart beats like a fiddle
    dancing right down the middle of me
    it's a delightful distraction
    my perfect passion for you
       like some beautiful pain
    that descends like rocks and rain
       that soaks and stones me
    proving again that i am not completely alone
       and still so in much in love.
    be still my ferocious fear
        that belief that you can't hear me screaming
     
    that you believe that i am not running the streets
    that you believe my words
    like a flurry birds
    decorate this town with such silly song
    but the voice that i dream with sings only to you.





















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    poeticmike commented on music and dreams

    11-30-2011

    Such a beautiful message! great write! very prolific indeed i love your imagery also!..keep up the good work!
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    Phission

    02/04/2012

    thanks, mate. i apreciate your time.

    ontherise1984 commented on music and dreams

    11-14-2011

    I have to agree with Logik's comment; simple messages written creatively make great poems. This IS a great poem.
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    Phission

    02/04/2012

    thank you so much !

    Logik commented on music and dreams

    11-06-2011

    NICE PIECE! I like the rhyme scheme the words were nice man very well executed...
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    Phission

    11/06/2011

    thank you ! it's simple and not very deep...it's just that i love a girl. she is very special and makes my world twist and turn....i love you, annie.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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