To write love on her arms

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    To write love on her arms
    I feel dead inside
    And I cut myself
    So I can feel alive.
    As the blood runs dry
    Water fills my eyes.
    Wanna crush the sky.
    Have to stop this lie.
    All alone I feel.
    These scars need to heal.
    This just cant be real.
    Its so hard to deal.
    Smiles Ill try to steal.
    Frowns I must conceal.
    No more pain today.
    Gone away today.
    Hope it stays this way.
    Don't want this dismay.

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    Robin commented on To write love on her arms

    03-04-2009

    your inner feelings of loneliness come through very well in this poem... and the reader can most assuredly feel them too... nice one...very nice one...
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    arfin09 commented on To write love on her arms

    02-28-2009

    liked the 1st 1/2 before you got stuck in the rhyming trap.good content subject needs to be heard. write more (try longer lines for flow?)
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