Puzzle pieces

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Confusion

    Puzzle pieces
    If I could just take what I like
    And disregard the rest
    And piece this puzzle together
    Then put this ache to rest
    If I could mix all of the qualities
    From this one to the next
    Then add a bit of you to me
    Then I wouldn’t be so perplexed
    If I could know the time line GOD has set
    To reveal this mystery
    Then I'd know just where to find you
    And I'd know you were made just for me.
    If I Could~
    Would I?

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    am2anangel commented on Puzzle pieces

    06-14-2009

    this piece was excellent. if we could really disregard the things we didn't like in life wouldn't that be great? Life truly is a puzzle with pieces that don't always fit.
    Reply to Comment

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    Claude’s Poems (19)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    The Flame 1 03/05/2009
    Bittersweet 1 03/05/2009
    Puzzle pieces 1 03/05/2009
    Infidelity 0 03/05/2009
    Retrospect 0 03/05/2009
    Counting days 0 03/05/2009
    Edel Araiza 0 03/05/2009
    Dennys 0 03/05/2009
    Summer Blues 0 03/05/2009
    For the Moment 1 02/21/2009
    The struggle 5 02/21/2009
    Quest-shun 2 02/21/2009
    Balance of trade 1 02/21/2009
    Shopping 1 02/21/2009
    Treasure 3 02/21/2009
    No more straw 2 02/21/2009
    A new year A new life 0 02/21/2009
    View Askew 1 02/21/2009
    To write love on her arms 2 02/21/2009
    Top of Page