Thoughts before sleep

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    A few thoughts

    Thoughts before sleep

     The goodness of your heart strengthens me
    To nurture the dreams that seek to fly free
    As they become the beauty they are meant to be
    Because of your presence I am able to see
    The particles of change that are the key
    In my eyes you are like a sheltering oak tree
    By your gentle inspiration I am refreshing me
    This love has its own life I feel you agree

    Graceladymn 9/20/09

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    dahlusion commented on Thoughts before sleep

    09-23-2009

    A perfect rhyming love song in your trademark voicing. Simply lovely!
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    graceladymn

    09/24/2009

    Thank you.

    Heartfelt commented on Thoughts before sleep

    09-22-2009

    You are an exceptional writer and becomming one of my favorites very quickly. Beautiful write.
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    graceladymn

    09/22/2009

    Gracious words Chris,I hope I can live up to your faith in my future writings.

    oldaubry commented on Thoughts before sleep

    09-21-2009

    I REALLY like the multiple rhymes here! I believe that form, structure and rhythm contribute perhaps almost equally to content in poetry, and your format here just increases the beauty of your deep, soulful, heartfelt expression. Being able to see that your work is so astute flatters me that you noticed my own contribution...thank you for this work, it warms my heart.
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    graceladymn

    09/21/2009

    Thoughtful comments you bring as a friendship gift. Thank you. Your work is very good, assist me to know when you have new posts, I often get lost when I am browsing the multitude of poems offered here and sometimes overlook when a friend has a new post.

    dancinghawk commented on Thoughts before sleep

    09-21-2009

    another beautiful post! happy Equinox to you, Love!
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    graceladymn

    09/21/2009

    Thank you and the never-ending source of joy to you as well.

    truth917 commented on Thoughts before sleep

    09-21-2009

    Wow.. Very strong and very well put. You paint the perfect picture for one as he/she reads your words. Beautiful..
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    graceladymn

    09/21/2009

    Thank you, the words are meant for someone, I am glad they speak to others as well for we all need to know we are cherished by others especially those so very close to us.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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