Get to the Core

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    No snowflake in an avalanche ever feels responsible. Voltaire

    Get to the Core

     Atomic spin just strip me bare
    Every false belief I wear
    Find me out and nothing spare
    Through the breeches let it tear
    In the gale of inmost prayer
    Start the merge of windswept air
    Awakened flame heart must declare
    All in me that seeks repair
    Rummage through the links impaired
    Open the catalyst to my aware
    Arouse loves spirit in midair
    Bring to mind the words of Voltaire
    "God is a circle whose centre is everywhere and circumference nowhere."
    Feed the hearts the loveliness rare
    That rises bright as unseen flares
    In Source we find for the all, sufficient care
    Nothing created does ever compare
    To the revisions you do prepare
    For those who step outside the square
    Let the proud upon the lowly stare
    For at heart we are all your heirs

    Graceladymn 9/6/09

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    dancinghawk commented on Get to the Core

    09-16-2009

    great access to spirit connection ... and love both of your Voltaire quotes ... your personal work comes thru in your words (and this piece reminds me of the piece i plan to post next ... it seems we write about very similar topics) ... love this ... thx for posting!
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    graceladymn

    09/16/2009

    thank you, I admire your work. I look forward to your next post, you are a splendid writer.

    soulwriter commented on Get to the Core

    09-07-2009

    Your style used for this piece is creative, reaching to tie thought and rhyme together without sacrificing content, - not an easy task when using one form of like syllables, Your content takes the reader to the core of your projected thought... Well written, keep creating strong!
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    graceladymn

    09/10/2009

    It is a shortened version of how I move beyond ego into higher-self opening fuller connection with GodSource so I can move within the movement of what needs to be created. In willingly going into the fire I can come out the otherside with much less stress taking the core of what I need to move to the next level of learning. Everybody has their own ways but I thought it might be useful to give an example to others who may want to go through the refining processes. Thank you for reading and commenting.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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