The Other Side Of The Mirror

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    The Other Side Of The Mirror

    From across this clear and fragile wall,
    She looks like me-Just like me,
    But when I look in her eyes all I can see,
    Is the pain sufficating her body,
    Like a foggy thick cloud surrounding her in and out,
    She struggles to breathe but there is no clean air,

    With each breathe she takes her body vibrates in pain,
    The evil air cuts her from inside,
    like tiny needles-they just wont stop,
    She screams and screams but still noone hears,
    She bleeds from inside but no blood apears,
    It all stays inside where her scars hide,
    There invisible to the world,
    But so real to her,

    This girl is hurting so bad,
    Nothing can numb her pain,
    Afraid to live, afraid to die,
    She just cant escape so she lives a lie,
    Paints a smile on her face,
    Says she lives in true bliss,
    If only that was real...

    K.M Nyquist

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    Bewitchments commented on The Other Side Of The Mirror

    02-27-2009

    Your poems are so raw you have a unique talent but i hope that you are not feeling the pain that you betray. I do hope you find your angel and true love.

    NayInLove commented on The Other Side Of The Mirror

    02-23-2009

    very good poem! you and i think alot alike :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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