The One That I Love

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    The One That I Love



    The first time I saw you I had a strong feeling
    and knew right away my heart you'd be stealing.
    Then you took it from me and I put up no fight
    because something told me it was alright.
    So now that you have me I hope you take care
    of the life and the love I am ready to share.
    I'll always love you and treat you real fine
    and hope you remember you'll always be mine.
    I knew you were the one the moment I saw you
    and without you near me I would always be blue.
    So let's stay together and we'll make the best of it
    for our life may be half over but we still have the rest of it.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on The One That I Love

    04-07-2009

    This one is good but in a silly way... :) i like the funny meatafors lol

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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