Quick Release

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    Quick Release

    Quick Release
    By Earl Burnett


    All I need is a quick release
    So I might find my inner peace
    This world has left me a shit in a pile
    All that was sacred now is just vile
    Lord won't you take me from all of this pain
    Please take me away before I'm insane
    I know that I'm asking alot from you now
    But can't you please take me or help somehow
    This life that you gave me no longer is great
    So take me away from all of this hate
    So all that I ask for is a quick release
    And maybe I'll find my inner peace

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Quick Release

    04-07-2009

    Its not bad but its not your best you can and will do better. its and (8)
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    Madelynn commented on Quick Release

    03-09-2009

    WELL EARL,YA MADE ME FEEL.WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY.YOU RELEASE IS THE LORD,AND YOUR POETRY.GOOD JOB.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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