The Mask You Wear

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do not judge but what you see

The Mask You Wear

Not the mask that you wear, nor the color of your skin,
tell me who you are or where you have been.

Who are hiding from; what have you done?
Where can you go, so you won't have to run?

Hiding behind shields; telling only lies.
Who are you hiding from and why do you cry?

Running for the border in the pouring rain;
can't you see the answers born from your pain?

Take a look a life, see the world around;
answers to your questions can surely be found.

Not the mask that you wear, nor the color of your skin,
tell me who you are or where you have been.

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Len commented on The Mask You Wear

06-08-2011

For me this poem attempt two important things that are very rare and difficult to achieve in new relationships. It tries to provides the confidence a man needs to be himself, and give him a blueprint to providing a woman with peace of mind. In a take a good look, and let me see before we leap way of saying there is nothing to hide. Good Job!!!!!!!!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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