BUSTED RHYMES

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just a thought - if writing were truly an offense of the law

BUSTED RHYMES

My pen is my weapon, these lines are my crime
I have created another sorrow-filled rhyme
So Judge tell me how much time will I serve
I hope it's not much more than I deserve
I have confessed my sins in a sullen prose
so pass down the sentence that you'll impose
Gone is the pain, over the love I lost
Just tell me now, what will be the cost?
I have already given up all that I hold dear
Nothing remains inside me not even a tear
Be it torture or death - I can take it all
Whatever the punishment Judge, it is your call!

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ShadowEyes commented on BUSTED RHYMES

12-22-2011

Another thing, I like the title lol. Buster rhymes... made me think of busta rhymes lol

ShadowEyes commented on BUSTED RHYMES

12-22-2011

Very nicely written. Keep up the good work... wonderful!!! :-)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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