The Longing

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    The Longing

    The rain beats softly caressing my inner soul
    I have secrets yet revealed longings to be told
    The sky is dark but inside my heart the sun shines
    My thoughts of you turn my mind to happier times
    Times of dancing in the rain and your lips soft on mine
    I can still feel your hands brush the hair from my face
    You whisper your eyes take my soul to another place
    I keep your memory alive here in my heart
    The taste the touch smell the spark.
    Could it be I held you in another life 
    and there's no one that can pass the test
    Could it be my soul searches unwilling to let go
    Until it finds you to rest

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    carynontherhine commented on The Longing

    01-20-2011

    Wow this left me speechless for the moment and I had to read once more. The emotions you display are ingrained in the reader to the end. You have lost a love. No one can pass the test to replace or even fill again. You are still very much connected. I am sure your love was very special and so is this write! Hugz

    kdarcy commented on The Longing

    01-17-2011

    Memories soft and gentle, some of your words, concepts and descriptions remind of several of my own pieces. thanks for sharing, be well k

    meme17

    01/17/2011

    thank you, I will go read some of yours

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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