The Idea of Sex, and Yours?

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  • sosmooth51
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EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS.. ITS ACTUALLY QUITE INTELLINGENT.

The Idea of Sex, and Yours?

You female are so beautiful. Your beautiful imagae, is such a beautiful image. Do you hide behind it, and live by the code that it contains true power? Or do you like to  pretend how it would feel like, to experience such a great feeling. Being in the fantasy  world you live in, and the dream land you sleep in. Combining both dimesnions into one and calling it life. But it's the hungry like fools who made you doll-like mind think that way.

You are as beautiful as a falling star from a night skied mountain. But that is all you're worth, just the stares, like a painting. He does not see your thoughts, he does not see your heart. He does not see your emotions. He only sees your pretty face:  and ironically that is all you need. And it is not even that he cares about. For, though, he stares at your face, he really sees his wishful desires, which  mostof the time comes true. The premeditation of confusing only you. The painful mistake of confusing an act with an emotion: sex with love. Sex is not love but like a religion you belive it is. Women give sex to get love, men give love to get sex, Of this I am so sorry, sorry that men and women communicate more with the eyes  than with our voices. Tis as if the looks of your image is as far more important than what is is you have to say.

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PurpleSkykt commented on The Idea of Sex, and Yours?

09-11-2009

Interesting. As a female, with having female as friends (or ex friends), we all have our reasons of having sex. But your poem, overall, is beautiful. It only enhances my curiosity of knowing the poets character...does he believe in his writing or was just blessed with this gift?

sosmooth51

09/11/2009

thank u soo much i reLLY appreciate your ctrique ...please feel free 2 read my other work

precpres commented on The Idea of Sex, and Yours?

07-13-2009

You have a point. That was a very beautiful poem. Love and sex all have different meanings to them all which should be appreciated seperately. Thank you for sharing your poem with your audience.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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