Hated Life

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  • Anger
    • sosmooth51
    • is walking on a bed of nails... behind fire..infront of me death..stay? or leap away?

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    thank you

    Hated Life

        I'm blind to love, i see evil through my voice. I

    feed off of hate and turn it into life. I'm blind to

    love never knew what it was. Never knew of its

    existence. Flowers!?! Roses!?! I always thought

    they were plants with colored shit on them. 

    Heaven... just a place that exists in the

    imagination. Life!?!  I always thought that was a

    nick name for  describing never ending pain.

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    precpres commented on Hated Life

    07-13-2009

    lol. I enjoyed reading this one too. You have a unique way of getting your point across.

    sosmooth51

    07/13/2009

    THANK U..IM GLAD SOMEBODY GETS IT... I HATE THE USUAL FORMAT OF PETRY..SHOULD BE LIKE WATER...FORMLESS...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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