I CAN NOT FIND US

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    • is walking on a bed of nails... behind fire..infront of me death..stay? or leap away?

    I CAN NOT FIND US


    Where are you? I need to find you. I am blind but still I search for you, like I search for myself, becuase you are me, I am you, we are we. Your Sincerity is what leaves me blind in total darkness, Imay sound pitiful, but it is becuase I can not find you, and since you are me, without you I can not find myself

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    precpres commented on I CAN NOT FIND US

    07-13-2009

    You took a different approach and I liked that. Worded very well.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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