I yell through my eyes, my tears become my words, {part 2} not really.

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    THANK YOU ALL FOR READING...I LOVE YOU ALL... U R MY FAMILY

    I yell through my eyes, my tears become my words, {part 2} not really.

     I wish we can run away and live on the moon...... but it's impossible to live in your eyes.

        even though your eyes was the place i was born.... and your eyes will also be my DEATH BED.

        because everytime you look at me i die inside.....with love.
    but i rather die from love......than to live with out it.

       
    When you touch me my soul melts, and when i see you i cry. 'Cause i can see my soul again.... 'cause my soul is made up of your tears.

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    Crush commented on I yell through my eyes, my tears become my words, {part 2} not really.

    07-13-2009

    this is not so much of a poem as much it is a BEAUTIFUL dedication to someone quite special. man, you must really love this person because you really sold it better than most people can. thank u, i love it !
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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