The Heavens

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This poam was written to an amazing picture from another poets page...... If it's not posted now it will be......... simply red

The Heavens









As the Heavens opened up......
Around us the little trees......
We have begun to see the light.....
Of the love He is........

All in One the Trinity.....
The Father,Son and the Holy Spirit.....
Which is love soft and pure.....
Jesus is all you have to admit......

He will come upon you.....
In a soft gentle way.....
Not hard or stern....
Turns none away.......

That truly seek Him.......
With all you are....
With an open soul......
He will heal your scars.....


Inside out.......
Make you whole again....
With out a doubt.....
He changed this human......

Called us trees....
In His word.....
In His Son....
His love was the sword.....

The wrath He is sparing us from.....
In His grace....
What He did on the cross....
satan it's in your face...


So stand you little trees....
You are of Him....
Jesus frees....
You of guilt of sin....


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MrGee commented on The Heavens

06-23-2010

WONDERFUL! I especially love the verse "He will come upon you...In a soft and gentle way.I am adding this poem to my favorites.

redbloodink

06/23/2010

Glad you liked it my friend...... red

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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