My story

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Inspired by Phoenix... A great writer... ty for the ?

My story

Transgendered......
That's what I'm labled....
A human......
I'm stable......

In an unstabled world.....
I live as a woman....
My life unfolds.....
A story told....

I have stuggled with...
My gender all my life....
Boy-girl.....
It's no mith.........

I'm me... you are you....
You might think......
I'm not crazy....
I'm just true......

To myself and every-one... around me....
I do my best to just love...
Not perfect or clame to be....
Did, you see the beauty of the dove...

I made a choice....
One for me....
I have a voice.....
For people you think are crazy...

Gay,straight, bi....
I'm not any of these.....
Don't ask why!
Please!

I'm just a lady....
Looking for a lady born..... a lady...
I'm just me....
My story....

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Necy commented on My story

12-21-2009

Just be true to yourself Redbloodink. You earned my respect by that. Listen to your heart , there are voices that want to be heard

redbloodink

01/31/2010

so true ... they need to be heard... the fight rages on......

SilverGirl commented on My story

12-20-2009

What a lovely was to describe to others who you are dear red. I do apologize for being rude to one who was rude to you. It just hurt me so to see you judged by someone you dont even know. tho thru it all, I know you've grown.A wonderful human being. You always have, you are now and you always will be in my heart. For the body you wear you did not ask to be cast. It's been a long road for you, each moment that passed. But please know this my dear red.. You will always be my sister..no matter your body.. no matter your name.. My feelings for you will remain the same.. You are always in my heart and prayers.. Love you SG Marie

redbloodink

12/20/2009

awwww ty my Sister Silver.... love ya.... Many blessings to you..

SilverGirl commented on My story

12-20-2009

Im so mad right now.. i wrote you a lovely comment and it froze up on me.. it didnt show. and i couldnt rate as it would not change pages. now ive lost what i wrote to you.. and chat will not open.. :(

Phoenix9 commented on My story

12-20-2009

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Phoenix9 commented on My story

12-20-2009

great write, its sad that many people have closed minds and find it so hard to accept, but you have a friend here and my mind is always open as is my friendship...

redbloodink

01/31/2010

ty Phoenix....... I hope God helps them open their minds and see the truth....... we all are imperfect but we should love one another as He loves us...... ty my friend....

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

redbloodink’s Poems (211)

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Title Comments
Let Me ....... Share .... Care and write again.... 7
Night or Day 1
I once was 2
A Silent Shot 9
I Find it, in My Mind 4
A Freezing Night!!!!!! under Your moon light 3
THANKS-GIVING 3
Other Fashion 2
Mankind!!!!!!
!!
5
I Refuse 5
Book 2 2
A BOOK 9
Last One 4
Realize 1
Twist of Faith 1
Race of Faith.......! 0
If all I had to say 1
Never Die........( I'm just saying ) 0
A real Human 1
And That Is That! 6
What's a Crappy Day 5
Soles of the Streets 1
The Heavens 1
Heard the Call 1
FOREVER TOGETHER! 2
Writting Away 1
Am I 1
What More 2
Away 4
Healed Me 3
Inside-Out 3
Elated 4
The Cat 4
Do You? 1
Is She 4
The God Zone 1
Up Early 4
Not Me 4
Popular 2
ABBA 2
O.P. INSPIREATION 7
Define Work..... 5
Bleed for the Need 6
No pain behind my walls 2
!I DO! 3
Time 2
Haircondition
er vs Airconditione
r
4
My Heart 4
LOSS OF LOVE 2
My Every-thing..
.......
1
BAD DREAM 2
Redefine 1
Intense 4
My Goal 8
I FIND 2
ERASED THIS 9
Mistress vs. Slave 9 4
Mistress vs. Slave 8 8
STRINGS 5
Imperfect Human 15
Mistress vs. Slave # 7 1
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 6 3
(((((((((( UNFOLDING )))))))) REVISED 4
MISTRESS vs. SLAVE # 5 2
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 4 3
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE # 3 5
Obscure 3
back again and is still here 1
Is still here 2
THE HOUR GLASS ( of the sands ) 2
YOU_SEE 8
MISTRESS VS. SLAVE 7
RANT 6
i try 3
!INDIFFERENT! 4
YOUR TIME 5
Comic Book 2
Pass By 0
EROTIC NIGHT 4
LIL" SONG 0
TOO SEE 3
Faith not Religion 7
ALL ALONE 5
REMEMBER 5
FIND 3
TTOTA,the trip of them all! 3
not done because 2
I Say! 6
Behind 4
MISSED 4
IT STINKS 6
TWO 3
FOR SURE 2
DEMONS COME 5
A Lovers Plea..... 7
Time Continuum 2
I Sit 2
Poetic Justice 5
Mistress vs. Slave 12
free-style 4
LOVE! after drinking.....
.
6
EACH_OTHER 8
MANY BLESSINGS 4
Faceless they become 5
COMMENTS & WRITINGS 3
YOURS' OR MINE 2
BLANK 2
LOVE DANCE! 6
FLY AWAY 5
A Killer 7
EROTIC TONIGHT 5
WINDOW OF TIME 4
Hundred 4
RUN WAY 2
BOLD 7
SOUL 2
Take 5
It's Love 2
Found Love..... 3
OriginalPoetr
y.Com
4
YET or NOT YET 2
STRAIGHT 4
MISTAKEN ALL HER LIFE 6
( Heard ) They must of....... 3
OP.COM 2
JUST STOPPED 4
what 5
DECISIONS!!!!
!
4
Destorted 4
HIS VOICE 4
A Christmas Greeting.... 3
Decisions of Frustration Frustrating 3
Blanket 5
Take Me Back 2
Chat room abrevations..
.
14
Our Parent..... 2
My story 5
A Nap 2
Cold Weather 1
Brain Like Rain 3
Fading 1
Flickering Shadows 2
Prayers...... 3
just 1
MY DREAM 0
YOU CALLED 1
FORGIVENESS 3
Fire With Color 7
ME AGAIN! 2
NULL & VOID 1
Winter Day 5
Then,There,No
w,Future?
2
MarionYost 3
SISTERS & BROTHERS 2
Questions not as it seems 3
My Heart 3
Blackfoot 2
Insperation 2
White........
.......
2
Nonners' 2
Rygar..... 2
Speachless 0
Speachless 4
THIS FANTASY 1
INK....... 3
Kool 1
SILVER VRS. GOLD 1
MISTYNIGHTS 1
Lord 3
Infectious Talk 5
Hold on HOPE!!!!! 3
WAITING ON LOVE 3
I Died 8
Consumed Me....... 0
.............
...AWAY......
.
1
Faded Dreams 2
10,000 ways to say nothing..... 3
MEMORIES,WORD
S,STORIES
1
Family 0
NO_MATTER WHAT I SAY 1
HOLD ON 1
!!!!!!!!!RED!
!!!!!!!
1
Molded Me......... 3
Obsession 3
A STORY 0
RANDOM 5
Empty But Full 5
THIS YOU CAN"T SEE 5
MY JOB 1
JUST THOUGHT 5
CHRISTMAS TO ME NOW 6
REDBLOODINK 7
LIGHT SIDE 2
BAD DAY!!!!! 3
WAITING ON SANTA 5
I MISS HER 5
MY PARENT 3
TWO SIDES OF ME 8
I AWAKE 2
IN TOO ME 1
ALONE 6
THE NEED 3
TRUST 1
((( UNFOLDING))) 3
THOUGHT 1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!DEAR GOD!!!!!!!!!!
7
HOPE 2
SECRETS 7
COLD AS STEEL 3
LIFE 8
Different 9