Intense

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A tribute for my Lord God and light of my life

Intense





Intensity.......
Real Intense/
@ wits end....
Never spent!


The money is gone.....
Bye the day.....
But I'm right where I belong....
So I stay....


Good days......
Good nights...........
I'm in the Lords hands.......
Living in His light......


The intenseness.....
Of how life can feel.............
Ever thing I made a mess of.........
Only God can heal.......

And it's in His time.......
Not mine......
I'm can't walk a straight line........
But Lord your doing Fine.......



red

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Phoenix9 commented on Intense

05-26-2010

Simple and to the point, He is always there watching and helping when he can, He brings life together as we are always healing and being reborn everyday. Under his watchful eye. Great Job Red
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redbloodink

05/27/2010

ty Phoenix.... yes He is.... Greater then me is He who dwells in me............ Fixing it all great! job Lord........ red

oneloveALZ commented on Intense

05-24-2010

Red, very beautiful Poem i like how you wrote it almost as if it is a prayer -one love
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redbloodink

05/25/2010

One-love ty for the comment...... I was just thinking that every thing I have messed up He is fixing it..... I guess a prayer and some praise.... thank You Jesus.........

ginga commented on Intense

05-22-2010

red, A creatively emotive poem on how faith gets us through. Uplifting. ginga
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redbloodink

05/22/2010

ty Ginga..... for your comment........

mindy9968 commented on Intense

05-11-2010

I like your simple, honest expression of your love for God. It proves you don't need big words and long paragraphs to create a powerful poem. :)
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redbloodink

05/17/2010

awe ty Mindy..... No we don't need big words or lots of them put together like a book...... He has taught me many things in the last couple of years and simple is just good enough...... red

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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