THE BIG LIE
To live the lie is the true high;But we don't want the big lie;
30 years from now the plaster that hits the wall will come in the form of fire and ice;
A fire so hot it will disintergrate whatever it touches;
If it is not fireproof.
THE BIG LIE
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But we don't want the big lie;
30 years from now the plaster that hits the wall will come in the form of fire and ice;
A fire so hot it will disintergrate whatever it touches;
If it is not fireproof.
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jenifer commented on THE BIG LIE
06-16-2013
- i like its message but there isn't much about ice
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1990lh commented on THE BIG LIE
05-25-2010
- wow blind short and powerful, you said an book full, and there is truth in these words and it shall infact disinergate whatever it touches.
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mamasan commented on THE BIG LIE
10-12-2009
- Wow, your vision is keen when you say: "A fire so hot it will disintergrate whatever it touches". In fact I doubt it will take another 30 years; your words are to the point and without mincing many words........I have just seen a preview of this disintegration.......and I believe it has started now.
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12/01/2009
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ladiciusangel commented on THE BIG LIE
09-18-2009
- I like this poem alot. It really makes you think.
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CatsMeow commented on THE BIG LIE
09-12-2009
- I didn't quite get the essence of this poem. But I appreciate variety. Thank you.
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