I DON'T WANT THE FAME

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    I DON'T WANT THE FAME

         No place to call home, a nomad destined, forever to roam;
    Run, run, run!  No where to hide.  Lost, mired down in grief;
    Because no one wants to accept you for who you've become;

    But a false legacy built to get you killed.  Hated because you survived
    a 40 year old plot;

    Despied becuase you can never do right, the cross game at its finest;

    Your body cold and shivering like muscle spasms, like a crying child sniveling, frightened to death.

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    dumplin commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    10-06-2009

    just a couple of misspellings, but very good. Hope to read more of yours.
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    CatsMeow commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    09-12-2009

    A pungent satire that could be expanded in essence of the plot. What is your central or primary audience?
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    miredidi49 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-28-2009

    Nice poem, just keep up with the spelling, very important in writing.
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    blindmaster

    07/28/2009

    Will do. Thanks for the comment

    Dreamer123 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-25-2009

    this is so emotional this is great keep up the great work blindmaster. you rock. and there's a spelling error on the line "despied " you spelled because wrong but no worries you still rock. :D God Bless.
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    blindmaster

    07/27/2009

    preciate the comment!

    Minerva22 commented on I DON'T WANT THE FAME

    07-15-2009

    I like this, but the title confused me, it just didn't seem to fit with the poem itself. Which is full of great lines, such as "hated because you survived a 40 year old plot".
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    blindmaster

    07/17/2009

    When your name is called out or is familiar with a lot of people it is almost as being a famous moviestar that is the reason for the shades you go 'hollywood' on they as when you not stutin nobody

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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