TAKING INVENTORY

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    Self-examination, you will be surprised what you will find!

    TAKING INVENTORY

    IF EVER IT WERE POSSIBLE TO FIND

    A LOVE TO COMPLETE YOU BODY AND MIND

    THE FOCUS IS THE SUBJECT . . .

     YOU FORGOT TO CLEAN OUT YOUR CLOSET

    ONCE LOST, YOU LOOK HIGH AND LOW TO FILL A VOID

     BUT IN THAT MAD RUSH. . .

    YOU STOP TO CLEAN OUT YOUR CLOSET.

    AT LAST   . . .    REALITY

     THE LOVE IN YOU. . .

     EVERYTHING COLOR-COORDINATED

     FROM WHITE TO STONE

     LOOKING DEEP

     AT LAST . . . A PERSPECTIVE

     ALL AGAST ! . . .  A LOST DIAMOND FROM YOUR HEART PENDANT

    ALL BECAUSE YOU TOOK THE TIME

    TO CLEAN OUT YOUR CLOSET

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    ccslim commented on TAKING INVENTORY

    06-23-2009

    Quite the gem here! The content is awesome and flows well! Its amazing what we find hidden in the closet from darkness to light! Made me think of an old song about digging up bones! Good write!
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    Poetry1959

    06/27/2009

    Thanks ccslim!

    connsk8 commented on TAKING INVENTORY

    06-08-2009

    i liked this one, thought provoking, I had to read it twice, just to appreciate all that it implies, I like poetry that keeps me guessing and wondering and is not always so obvious..
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    Poetry1959

    06/10/2009

    Thank you ... I like this one too!

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