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Mental Disorders-Oppositional Defiant Disorder

ODD

Where are you going with your colossal mind?

In a room full of people, one chair left to find,

you can’t fit in it

 

Where can you stay with such big ideas?

You believe that what you want, you will get

That life will be handed to you?

 

No rules, for you

You are the rule maker

No permissions to ask

The authority is yours to take

 

Can you work? can you play?

Your lot in life is sorrow

 

 

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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