SUCH IS LIFE

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    SUCH IS LIFE

    my head is too big for my body
    or my body is too big for my head
    i either have to loose my head to suit my body
    or train my body to be big as my head
    whichever way out,it can not be the same
          is even how the world is
        like fingers not being equal
         such is life with people
         not equal in everything
    so i rather save myself some breathe
    and keep myself so big and body so small
            for such is life

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    laydbak1 commented on SUCH IS LIFE

    06-27-2009

    A good write, reminded me how grateful i am i wasn't born some kind of homogeneous blob... lol.... enjoyed the read...

    Sydney commented on SUCH IS LIFE

    06-25-2009

    lol. this a creative poem that make someone laugh about the uneasiness of big and small.

    Morris commented on SUCH IS LIFE

    06-22-2009

    funny sky it make me chuckle at the mind picture the prose show if my head it is very good thanks---M

    Chi commented on SUCH IS LIFE

    06-22-2009

    loving the creative you in its original design is an approach to true happiness and a content frame of mind and true inner peace. I rated this poem a 100. look forward to reading more of your work. love your style of poetry (very realistic and level headed). Chi.

    AleaPendragon commented on SUCH IS LIFE

    06-21-2009

    short and to the point beautiful and so true, and can only make do.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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