Succeed

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  • wickedpoet
  • Found ALOT of my old writes they will be up soon

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just a lil mental poem i wrote just to give me that dont give up mentality

Succeed

How can it be what thy come to be
I am trying to be all I can be
Some one tells me you can't do it
I say that cant be
no matter what you say  
no matter what you do
I CAN DO ANY THING I WANT TO DO

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Magician commented on Succeed

12-19-2010

To the point and usually when someone says to me I cant I make sure I can, great read and honesty

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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