Succeed

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  • wickedpoet
  • Found ALOT of my old writes they will be up soon

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just a lil mental poem i wrote just to give me that dont give up mentality

Succeed

How can it be what thy come to be
I am trying to be all I can be
Some one tells me you can't do it
I say that cant be
no matter what you say  
no matter what you do
I CAN DO ANY THING I WANT TO DO

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Magician commented on Succeed

12-19-2010

To the point and usually when someone says to me I cant I make sure I can, great read and honesty

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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