My Game

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    • Found ALOT of my old writes they will be up soon

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    on of my personal faves

    My Game

    Let me show you the way
    away from this dreadful fate
    lets make it a game
    to play my game to know
    how to count by twos
    and to throw your shoes
    let me make you a deal
    count by twos and make a move
    we will begin my childish game
    2 4 6 8 10 you start to go to 100 or more
    if you win this stupid game
    you will the better of two
    i say
    but let me promise you here and now
    never play fair all around
    for my name is lucifer here i say
    so lose my stupid game
    here in hell you stay
    win my game free you go back to your deceitful ways in full
    for when you die heaven u fly

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    Magician commented on My Game

    01-04-2011

    I really like the tone of this poem strong and subtle hard to do but you did it! Great job going to read some more

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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