stay with me

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    • DarkChi
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    a tribute to my love that i may lose some day but hope with all my heart i never do

    stay with me

    With both rings on my fingers
    I hold to hope that
    I will keep my trombone player
    My love that is the other half of me
    The one who has stuck by me when I fall
    Held me when I cried
    The one who showed me that family is quite nice
    I hope with these rings I can keep
    The love that has fulfilled me
    And I don't want to risk losing him
    I don't want to take these rings off again
    I know it's a lot to hope for but I don't want to lose him
    My dark eyed, dragon loving,  hip hop writing, love
    He's everything I'm not
    And I don't think I could....go a day without
    His kiss, his voice in my ear, his smile lighting the room, his heart beat by me
    The heat of his soul next to me in bed
    I know I couldn't go long with out knowing
    The love I know now
    I'm hoping that these rings stay on until I die
    And even then I don't want to lose the love that I've known now
    I don't think I could go without his touch
    His life, his laughter or his look
    I don't want to feel the pain I felt when he said
    We wouldn't work, he wanted something new
    I don't want him to doubt my love for him again
    I know I would die if I lost the true love that I'd never find again
    So please, lover, don't, please don't question our love
    For I know I never could
    I don't question the feelings I have for you....so please stay
    Stay with me

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    Mandi commented on stay with me

    03-11-2010

    okay .. Well there is nothing dark about that. It seems like a veery healthy relationship. I envy the love you feel

    kage commented on stay with me

    03-09-2010

    this is a good story poem and i like it the wording is great and the flow is good good work

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