A Dark Christmas

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I just thought of this...it's kinda cuties pooh...and dark...

A Dark Christmas

The wind whips around me
As I sit under the snowy tree
The snow blows around
I've been walking so long
This was the only shelter I could find
It's Christmas eve
And I feel the grip of death upon me
The cold of the weather
The frozen water soaked me to the bone
I'm nearly frozen to death
I hear a beast come to me
It lays around my body
It is warm
I grip at it's fur shaking
It lays it's large head upon my lap
I lay agents the beast
Sleep grips at me
The beast wipers
It is worried
I drift off to a dreamless sleep
Awakening in the morning
To see a wolf wrapped around me
It is larger then any normal wolf
It is looking at me
It stands and runs into the trees
Coming out from where it went in
A young man approaches me
'I was worried about you'
I smile
A werewolf....
Saved me on Christmas eve...
And I knew, We were meant to be.

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BringMeBullets commented on A Dark Christmas

02-05-2010

This is very cool. I like the part when he comes out of the trees and reveals that he is human as well as wolf. It guides you along nicely into this fairy tale... I like it. Well done.

thedog commented on A Dark Christmas

12-22-2009

thats was very lovey i like it . i got some poems to read ples do xoxo andrew

redbloodink commented on A Dark Christmas

12-22-2009

great write Chi.... nice flow..... nice to see a dark write end with such a loving end..... red

MarionYost commented on A Dark Christmas

12-15-2009

I agree This one's AWESOME! Originality is the key to great poetry. Thanks for sharing! All the best -Marion-

SoundingStorm commented on A Dark Christmas

12-15-2009

I liked this a lot! very beautiful, and is very hopeful with the darkness coming to light at the end there, keep writing!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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